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The activity of volunteers will be held in summer vacation by the student union of the university.And now the union has to recruit some volunteers because of that.The purpose of this activity is to improve the ability of practice around the students.Firstly,we will go to a rest home to help the aged fix their living goods.Secondly,we will do some community work for the poor.We have no restrictions for the people to sign up without their enthusiasm.And you can call 88551314 to contact us.