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[1]I really feel that time goes so fast.
[2]Every week I have a plan.
[3]But in fact ,I never complete them and even more I created a lot of new objects to do during I finish the plan/before I finish the plan
[4]They are all waiting for me to complete.
[5]Maybe I'm such a self-conceited person.
[6]Although my plans came to naught again and again.
[7]I'm still making another packed schedule and never doubt if I can carry out it completely.
[8]Though I have never complete anyone of the plans.
[9]'My ambition is to be a superman.'I say to myself.
[10]So I think that I should be able to do a lot of things in such a short and also enough time.
[11]I should get an extra-high acceleration than common people.
[12]For example,this was my plan of last week:
[13]Paint two pictures,write a whole script for my comic(The comic is about 30 pages) and finish reading the four tragedies of Shakespeare.
[14]Up to now,I only painted a half of one of the two pictures,I have no inspiration of the script,I only read a half of 'King Lear'.
[15]Now I still believe that I couldn't finish the plan is because of my indolence instead of the plan was too packed.
[16]So,I still plan a lot and do a half.
[17]I'm very disappointed to myself.
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1]I really feel the time goes so fast.
[2]Each week I have a plan.
[3]But in fact ,I never complete them and even I created a lot of new objects to do until I finish the plan/before I finish the plan
[4]They are all waiting for me for completement.
[5]Maybe I was such a self-conceited person.
[6]Anyhow,my plans came to naught again and again.
[7]I'm still making another packed schedule and never doubt if I can completely carry it out .
[8]Anyhow I have never complete anyone of the plans.
[9]'My ambition is to be a superman.'I say myself.
[10]So I think that I should be able to do a lot of things in such a short and enough time.
[11]I should get an extra-high common acceleration than people.
[12]For example,this was my plan last week:
[13]After painting two pictures,writing a whole script for my comic(The comic is about 30 pages) ,I finish reading the four tragedies of Shakespeare.
[14]Up to now,I have only painted a half of one of the two pictures,I have no inspiration of the script,I only read a half of 'King Lear'.
[15]Now I still believe that I couldn't finish the plan ,because my indolence instead of the plan was too packed.
[16]So,I still plan a lot and do a half of .
[17]I'm very disappointed of myself.