When I was in elementary school ,I did badly in a test.So I felt very disappointed .I a person sat in the room cry and d
问题描述：
When I was in elementary school ,I did badly in a test.So I felt very disappointed .I a person sat in the room cry and didn't talk to anyone.My mother comforted in the outside ,but I still felt very sad .A few hours later ,I stopped crying and I understood that it is no use crying yesterday .So I went to the living room and chatted with my mother for a while.And then I went to the movies,read books and did sports with my friends .Finally ,I felt much better.
答
1、首先elementary改为primary要好一些；2、I a person sat in the room cry and didn't talk to anyone.你这是典型的中文式英语,改为I was crying in the room and didn't talk to anyone.3、comforted 后要有宾语,...