寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.

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寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.
我今晚就要发言了,
Good afternoon,everybody,
I’m very glad to have this opportunity to make a speech to you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.
I love my class very much!Because I think we’re a struggling team.In study,although we’re not the best class,we’re the hardest one.As far as I’m concerned,our classmates all like studying very much.On the other hand,we’re a unitive team.For example,military training.We won the second.As is known to all,military training needs the perfect cooperation.And we do it.
This is our class.It’s a harmonious class.
Okay,these are all I want to say.Thank you.

Good afternoon,everybody:It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to make a speech for you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.I love my class very much!On one hand,I think we’re a strugglin...