哪位能帮我看看,这句话的语法是不是有问题?

问题描述:

哪位能帮我看看,这句话的语法是不是有问题?
Makes me what to pressure this issue even more,and work relentlessly pressure these goals.
我是让一个美国朋友帮我改的一篇文章,可是我就是看不懂他写的这据话。

oops there is a spelling mistake," what" ought to be "want".