帮我看看英语句子语法对不对The story of beavers teaches me that making plans is the prerequisite for doing anything well.From my personal experience,I learn that keep busying does not mean working hard.

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帮我看看英语句子语法对不对
The story of beavers teaches me that making plans is the prerequisite for doing anything well.
From my personal experience,I learn that keep busying does not mean working hard.

the story of beavers gave me a leesson, it made me unstand that making plans is nessecery to succeed. as my own experience, being busy does not mean working hard/working well.

keeping busy
其他没问题

Chinglish,语法没什么很大错误.

语法没什么很大错误。有点中国式英语的味道。 你把你要说的中文告诉我,我帮你翻译。

teaches me a lesson that 好一点.
I learn that keeping busy 你应该是打字打错了.does not后最好加上“always" . 个人意见,仅供参考!

Chinglish