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请大家多提宝贵意见,文章写得不好请见笑!Ladies and gentlemen:Hello,everybody!My topic today is about friendship.As we know,the friendship often plays an important role in our life,and it need two sides to care about each other.Now,how can we keep the friendship with our friends?At first,we should show our loyalties to our friends.For example,we had better keep the secret between you and your friends because doing this can make your friends think that you are worth making friends with.And then,honesty is also a very important favor which can make great influence in the friendship,i believe you can not stand your friends being unhonest.What is more,showing your respect to them is of great importance,everybody is equel and should receive respect.Finally,as a somebody's friend,you must learn to share happiness and sorrow.All right,that's all that i want to say,thank you!