急;高一英语改错
急;高一英语改错
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Great changes have been taken place in my family in the last ten years.
When I was a child ,my family lived simpls life.We lived in a big yard,where several families shared a row of house made of bricks.In addition ,the food we ate and the cloth we wore were not as richer as today.My parents and I shared a bike when we visit our relatives .
Our life is becoming better and better in recently years.Now we are living in a new flat.There are a variety of foods stored in the fridge us to choose from.We can wear new clothes throughout year .My father drives us where we want to go because we own a private car .Beside,our environment has been improved a lot.
Great changes have been taken place in my family in(over) the last ten years.
When I was a child ,my family lived (a) simpls life.We lived in a big yard,where several families shared a row of house(houses) made of bricks.In addition ,the food we ate and the cloth(clothes) we wore were not as richer(rich) as today.My parents and I shared a bike when we visit(visited) our relatives .
Our life is becoming better and better in recently years.Now we are living in a new flat.There are a variety of foods(food) stored in the fridge (for) us to choose from.We can wear new clothes throughout year .My father drives us where we want to go because we own a private car .Beside(Besides),our environment has been improved a lot.