改错 共有十个错误
改错 共有十个错误
My hero is a doctor ,who saved my life when i could have died .in fact,she has saved quite a few children's life .At the age of five ,i was serious ill and my life was in the danger .My parents were all worried about if i could recover from the disease .I was lucky enough to meet Dr.Liu,a great doctor who is always easy to talk .He does lots of different tests to find the medicine to cure me.i owe it to him that i am still alive .Dr.Liu,he has made a big difference to the lives of others ,is respecting by many people in our city.
in the danger 改为 in danger.
my parents were all 中的 all 改为 both ,两个人用both ,三个人用all
easy to talk 改为 to talk with ,
he does 改为 he did
he has made ..把he 改为 who ,这个是定语从句,说明前面的dr .liu 的
is respecting 改为 is respected 是被尊重,用被动语态.其他的呢in fact 在句首，该首字母大写， Infacta few 改为 a lot of serious变为seriously ,副词才能修饰形容词illchildren's life 改为children's lives