英语短文改错(下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词)

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英语短文改错(下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词)
After I finished my school,I began to look for a job. Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested. Last Sunday morning, I received a phone call from a man naming Mr.Wang. He said on the phone, “ I hear you do well on your studies. I may offer you a job.”I entered into his office with a beating heart. How I wished I will go through the job-hunting talk and that he would take on me as a lab assistant. And to my surprised, what he said made me feel disappointed.That he needed was only a model.

1 After I finished my school 去掉my 2 Now several months had passed, and I haven't found the job I'm interested. had 改为 have3 and 改为 yet4 改为 I'm interested in5 I received a phone call from a...