英语小作文修改

英语小作文修改
Recently I indulge in Internet shopping. Internet shopping is very convenient. Such as buying clothes. First， enter the network store which the style and the prices you think good. Then choose your favorite clothes into the shopping cart. Finally remit the money through the Self-help bank. There are many kinds of clothes are very good-looking and the price is very cheap on the Internet. The most important is the clothes you bought are the same with the picture on the Internet. Buying books is also very convenient. The price in the Internet is cheaper than bookstore. So you needn’t to go out can buy what you need is very convenient
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