英语作文 麻烦看下我又没有语法错误

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英语作文 麻烦看下我又没有语法错误
是关于餐桌礼仪的
Hello I know you will come to China recently and ask for help to know "China's table protocol" I can give you some advice
When you wait for food by table ,don't play the chopsticks because other people may feel you aren't serious(我想表达的是严肃不知这个词可可以) You should remember not talk to other people when food is full of your mouth.And when you eat soup,pay attention to dringking quietly,or you will make other one think you are impolite
Remember all my advice and do it ,you will have a good meal!

错误好像是没有 ,但是我想给楼主的文章加几个小小的建议~一,ask for help to know "China's table protocol" ,可以在know 后面+ 一个 ‘about’ ,这样看读起来就更好了.二,你可以把serious 改成impolite ,不礼貌的....