英文小日记改错,谢谢!
英文小日记改错,谢谢!
Back to my college
Sep.4th Hot
I arrived in my college at night in 27th August. I felt so tired because I waited for the bus for nearly 2 hours!I spent a whole day to put the things bake into my drawers and clothespresses.
The first thing I did was installed my computer and tried to get into internet but I faild. There are some network problem in my PC and I didn't knew how to mend it. I felt upset and worried but I can't do anything!The Network Center in my college didn't work untill three days ago. On Thursday I called at the Network Center and asked them how to mend it.They helped me to make it work so now I can surfing the internet~~
Cool~~~
首先,"我花了一整天的时间来整理东西"中的"整理东西"不知道怎么表达?
还有,网络中心的工作人员这个"工作人员"要用哪个词才恰当?
这里面应该有很多语法错误才对> 如果可以的话希望能有一些写作建议,比如其他的表达法等等
谢谢大家 如果改得详细的话我会追加赏分哦!
Sep.4th Hot
I arrived in my college ON THE NIGHT OF THE 27th August.I felt so tired because I HAD waited for the bus for nearly 2 hours!I spent a whole day to put AWAY MY THINGS.
The first thing I did was TO INSTALL my computer and tried to CONNECT TO THE internet but I faild.There WERE some network problemS WITH my PC and I didn't knOw how to PUT it RIGHT.I felt upset and worried but I COULDN'T do anything!The STUFF in my college computer center didn't work untill three days ago.On Thursday I called the Network Center and asked them how to mend it.They helped me to SOLVE IT so now I can USE the internet~