谁会帮我回一封英语信,

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谁会帮我回一封英语信,
原内容是这样的:
Hello,my name is Martha,l'm 16 years old and l live in New York.l'm in tenth grade in Senior High school.My favorite subjects are history and Spanish.l'm also studying Chinese in evening class.
l'm writing to teenagers all over the world.l have some questions about your memories of your first year at school.Would you mind answering the questions for me?
.What is your first memory of school?
.What was your favorite activity when you were in first grade?
.What can you remember about your first teacher?
.Who was your first best friend?Is he or she still your best friend?
Here are my answers!My first memory of school was the smell of paint!They painted the walls at the start of the year.The smell disappeared quite quickly,but I still remember ir.My first best.friend was a girl called Molly and we were friends for about three years.But then she moved to California.I still write to her.My favorite activity in first grade was drawing pictures.My first teacher was calleed Miss Sharp,and she had the biggest smile in the world.
有谁可以帮我回复一封这个信.名字可以先随便取个英文名就可以了.希望能在明天下午之前.

Hello,Martha,I'm so glad to receive your mail.My name is Emma and I'm also a teeneger girl in the Senior High school.I have study English since I was 10 years old and I like it very much.In order to improve my interest and ablity I watch many American films in my spare time.
My memory of school was the big lawn in my school.It's really big enough for our young students to play in there,We run and sing,Fortunely we sometimes catch some insects which hided in the grass.It's a wonderful free memory and I never forget that happy days.
The first activity I took part in was playing balls.Our class hold a competition and we dribble balls to see who can dribble the most in one minute.
My first teacher is Mrs,Chen.She is a very kind lady and told us many funny stories.She was always patient for our strange questions.My first best friend is Lisa,we knew each other since I came to primary school.We can share everthing including some secrets.We are not go to the same Senior High school now but we keep in touch by telephone.And we like hanging out together in weekends or holidays.
有疑问可以继续提谢谢,不过感觉有点对不上我的原文。呵呵,不过也没关系。这也行了。