英语老师进 帮我看看我造的句子对不对 是个定语从句

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英语老师进 帮我看看我造的句子对不对 是个定语从句
This is the girl who won the first prize in speech contest.
如果哪里不对 请帮我修改修改

你这句话是对的.也可以写成
This girl is the one who won the first prize in speech contest.
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O