这句英语有没有语法错误?

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这句英语有没有语法错误?
说明一下,原句中文:我渴望在XX大学深造学习.不仅因为这里有优秀的有研究能力的老师和教授,还因为这是我童年的梦想.问:是否有语法错误?或者帮我改造更口语化.谢谢!
I’m eager to further my study in XX University. Not only because there are excellent teachers and professors who have the strong researched abilities, but also because this is my childhood dream.

没大错,直接改了.应该是一句话,否则后面的not only because…but also…就没有主句.I’m eager to further my study in XX Universitynot only because there are excellent teachers and professors who have str...