英语翻译我现在急需有人帮我修改一下这篇英语小短文.这是我刚刚写的,毛病肯定很多的,We have many subject in our class.We have English,math,Chinese and more.I am a student in Grade seven.I like English very much.Because it's interesting.In our class,many girls like music class,because music is relaxing.And they can sing pop song and dance.But my friend Mary doesn't like it.She thinks it's boring.And I don't like music,either.Many boys like P.E.and computer.On P.E.class,they can play the basketb

我的梦想
早上好,尊敬的评委,老师.今天站在这里我感到无比的荣幸和兴奋.我演讲的标题是我的未来,我的梦想.
每个人都喜欢想象自己的未来.作为学生,最大的梦想大概是一所著名的大学或者一个好的工作,有些人可能想出国深造.对我而言,什么是我的梦想?我经常问我自己,当我进入中学的时候,我告诉我自己:这是我最现实的将来,我的梦想将从这里开始.我的梦想是我能够进入一所好的高中.但是,在最后的两年中,我想我浪费了太多的时间,因为我在又些学科的学习成绩不是很好.现在,我已经初三了,我将要面对中考(进入高中).我想我已经真的长大了.当我来到初三的时候,我尽我一切力量做好每一件事情.我知道学习是很重要的.我想在一些学科上有好的成绩,我快速地正确得在一定时间里完成了学习,最重要的是我非常透彻的了解课本以及理解每一个定理.在那之后我做了一些提高考试能力的练习,,因为我知道一个人的脑容量是有限的,有可能我会忘记所有我学过的知识.

I am a student in Grade seven. There are lots of courses for us such as english,math,chinese and so on.I like English the best because it's interesting.
Many girls in my class like music, because music is relaxing, and they can sing pop song and dance, but my friend Mary doesn't like it, because she thinks it's boring, and I am with her..
Many boys like P.E. and computer class. On P.E. class they can play basketball and ping-pong. It's really exciting! On computer class,all boys feel happy to play some computer games, and that is why they love it.

文章阅过，总体不错。微有瑕疵，大写改过，仅供参考：
We have many subjectS in our class.We have English,math,Chinese and more.I am a student in Grade seven.I like English very much.Because it's interesting.
In our class,many girls like music class,because music is relaxing.And they can sing pop song and dance.But my friend Mary doesn't like it.She thinks it's boring.And I don't like music,either.
Many boys like P.E. and computer.IN P.E. class,they can play basketball and ping-pong.It's really exciting!IN computer class,boys can play the computer game.THEY'RE just so happy!
我们班有很多科目。我们有英语，数学，汉语等。我是一个七年级的学生。本人非常喜欢英语。因为它很有趣。
在我们班，很多女孩子喜欢音乐课，因为音乐是放松。她们能唱流行歌曲和舞蹈。但我的朋友玛丽不喜欢这个科目。她认为这是无聊。而且我也不喜欢音乐。
许多男孩喜欢体育和电脑。在体育课上，他们可以打篮球和乒乓球。这真是令人兴奋！在计算机课上，我们可以玩电脑游戏。这真是太开心了！

We have many subjects in our class.such as English,math,Chinese and so on.I am a student in Grade seven.I like English very much.Because it's interesting.
In our class,many girls like music class,because it is relaxing aslo they can sing pop song and dance.But my friend Mary doesn't like it.She thinks it's boring.And I don't like music,either.
Many boys like P.E. and computer.in P.E. class,they can play the basketball and ping-pong.It's really exciting!in computer class,boys can play the computer games.It's happy too!

subject改为subjects,
and more 改为and so on
song改为songs
On P.E.class 和On computer class中,把On改为In
play the basketball 去掉the
play the computer game中改为 games
这是我找到的语法错误,语言方面你自己改一下.

我们班有很多科目。我们有英语，数学，汉语等。我是一个七年级的学生。本人非常喜欢英语。因为它很有趣。
在我们班，很多女孩子喜欢音乐课，因为音乐是放松。她们能唱流行歌曲和舞蹈。但我的朋友玛丽不喜欢这个科目。她认为这是无聊。而且我也不喜欢音乐。
许多男孩喜欢体育和电脑。在体育课上，他们可以打篮球和乒乓球。这真是令人兴奋！在计算机课上，我们可以玩电脑游戏。这真是太开心了！

subject改成subjects more改成so on I have a passion for English because it is interesting . In our class , many girls are fond of listening to the music. They also can sing some popular songs . either改成neither However，boys in my class are more interested in sports and computer , cause they can play basketball and table tennis at P.E class.