这句话语法上有错误吗?

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这句话语法上有错误吗?
I hear voices in my head They council me and take to me they understand ,But my life control with me

i hear voices in my head 这句没有.但后面的council 是名词,不能拿直接作谓语,还有take是及物动词,所以to不应在它后面,还有control也是及物动词,with可以去掉,另外,they understand前面应有连接词what做understand的宾语.