帮忙修改一下这片英语短文有语法错误或者其它错误的地方,
帮忙修改一下这片英语短文有语法错误或者其它错误的地方,
Do you see that yellow snake?Yes,it's in the green grass.It is out of the zoo snakes.see,the zoo staff came,He wants to put the snake back.Next to the boy and girl are very panic,they think this snake will hurt them.But this snake is not malicious.It's just homesick,want it to mom and Dad.We are longing for freedom,in fact,animal is the same,We put the animal up,as our exhibits,let them lose their homes.Animal also has the good,we need to carefully communicate with them,let them free to live happily.
Did you see that yellow snake?Yes,it's in the green grass.The snake was out of the zoo.Look!The staff of the zoo is coming.He wants to put the snake back.The boy and the girl next to the snake were in great panic because they thought that it would hurt them.But this snake is not malicious,It's just homesick and wants his mom and dad.We are long for freedom,so as the animal.We pick the animal up as our exhibits and let them lose their homes .Animals also have the good points,we need to carefully communicate with them to let them free to live.
~~大概就是这样,纯手工哈,答题不易哦,求采纳 o(∩_∩)o ~~