我写的一篇英语短文,帮忙看看有没有语法错误,或者什么需要改进的地方!Hi,boys and girls!From 7:30 a.m to 9:00 p.m on Sunday,there is a program in the school hall.The name of the program is "Kung fu Panda".Most people like the program very much and the ticket price is only 15 yuan.Do you want to watch the program?Please come on!
我写的一篇英语短文,帮忙看看有没有语法错误,或者什么需要改进的地方!
Hi,boys and girls!From 7:30 a.m to 9:00 p.m on Sunday,there is a program in the school hall.The name of the program is "Kung fu Panda".Most people like the program very much and the ticket price is only 15 yuan.Do you want to watch the program?Please come on!
Hi,kids! From 7:30 a.m to 9:00 p.m this Sunday, we'll have wonderful time in the school hall. Movie "Kung fu Panda" is to be on show. You all wanna see it? Because the fee is as low as only 15 RMB. Do come and enjoy it!
同学们，你们好！星期天早上七点半到九点半在学校礼堂会有电影放映，节目名称叫做功夫熊猫。很多人都很喜欢这部电影，票价也仅仅15元。你们也想看这部电影吗？那么快来吧！
我给你改改啊Hey,guys!there is a movie in our school hall from 7:30 to 9:00 this Sunday.The name is "Kong fu Panda".Most people like it very much and it costs you only 15 yuan to watch.So com on!
功夫哪个词应该写成Kongfu 不是分开的