英语作文求英语达人帮忙找出错误好让我改正

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英语作文求英语达人帮忙找出错误好让我改正
The Wonder Textile Factory mainly produces textiles.To you surprise,the textiles are made from high-quality and natural materials of wool and cotton,so they are environmentally and friendly.Not only this,but also The Wonder Textile Factory with ISO 2000 management system and professional teams is well-funded.
After reading these presentations,are you eager to take a look?Go to the Guangzhou Industrial Park.We will welcome your arrival!

没什么语法错误,就是单词和标点符号相隔太近,例如这种:look?Go