英语小作文语法挑错
英语小作文语法挑错
A handsome man,who is called *,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,is famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for The Story Of Police,Who am I.He is an accomplished actor,who is good at chinese KongFu and funning fighting.* devoted his life to films.There is no doubt that he is a super star of Asia
A handsome man,who is called *,was born on 1954.4.7 in H.K,who is a famous actor.He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old and he is famous for the cinima《The Story Of Police》and 《Who am I》.(我觉得上一句分为两句比较好：He began to take part in the movie when he was 8 years old .《The Story Of Police》and 《Who am I》are his most wonderful works.)He is an accomplished actor,who is good at chinese KongFu and funny fight.* devoted his life to films.There is no doubt that he is a super star of Asia.
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