请问这段话有语法错误吗?
问题描述：
请问这段话有语法错误吗?
When asked about your job has more affected on your happiness than
your social life does or not.Some People argued that they feel enjoyable and
substantial during the work time.Enhance,they think jobs bring majority
enjoyments to them.But the others disagree with it and claimed that the social
life brings them pleasure more than work does.In my opinion,social activitieseffect on my delight more.
答
第一行 about 改为whether affected 改为effect第二行 some 小写 前面改为逗号 feel改为felt第三行 enhance 改为 therefore majority改为 major第四行 the others 改为 others disagree 加d with it 改为 to that 第...