帮忙看看那些需要改的 或语法错误的 谢谢
问题描述:
帮忙看看那些需要改的 或语法错误的 谢谢
I'm coming to yunnan for travelling.I hope you can happy every day,and find your ture man.Do you konw who i am?Haha.I cannot tell you.Why?Because i just want you to get crazy! If you receive this letter you can post in your weibo.So i can see it!
答
I'm coming to Yunnan for travelling.I hope you can BE happy every day,and find your MR RIGHT.Do you konw who i am?Aha!I WON'T tell you.Why?Because i just want you to get crazy!If you receive this letter you can post IT in your TWITTER.So i can see it!
中间大写字母部分是我的修改,