点评一下这篇文章 急

相关推荐

• 大家可不可以帮我找一下 冬天里,你不要砍树 这篇文章：冬天里,你不要砍树作者：查尔斯·贝多
• 王戎识李这篇文章告诉我们一个什么道理 急
• 请帮我改一下这篇英语文章,上海世博带给我许多ShangHai Expo Bring Me A LotEverybody knows the two thousand and ten Shanghai world expo held in China?It iet us know that we have lots of proble now.And it iet me know that how important to protect the enThe world expo to China promoted the economic development and promoting international cooperation,speeds up the domestic infrastructure construction,but also show oneself civilization,is a great opportunity.The world expo let me
• Today is my birthday.This morning,I taked a walk.Now gradually into the winter,the leaves on thetrees fall down and drifting profusely and disordly.Branch was empty,feel a kind of pure and fresh feeling.Later,I wrote my homework at home,to the afternoon on the small classes.In the evening,I had a big dinner with my family and I had a small party at home.We all very happy.这篇文章有语法错误吗,请一一指点,错的单词也请纠正一下,
• 麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误,
• 帮忙翻译一下这篇文章Fed Chorus Out of Tune on Rates
• 帮我修改一下这篇文章
• 帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误,要参加比赛的.非常感谢!在线等.The Expo was held on the first of May and end on the thirtieth of October. There over 184 days to go for World Expo.Many people said ,"There is so beautiful." I think so . We also can go to Japan Pavilion ,Korea Pavilion and Canada Pavilion.We can see many people from the other countries. We can speak English with them. And we must be polite.We should get a good influence to them. We should be friendly to them . We sho
• 帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误或是可以改进的地方?
• 燕子 阅读 一身乌黑光亮的羽毛,一对俊俏轻快的翅膀,加上剪刀似的尾巴,这就是活泼机灵的小燕子.二三月间,微风轻轻的吹拂着,毛毛细雨从天上洒落下来千万条柔柳展开了鹅黄色的嫩叶.青的草,绿的叶,各色鲜艳的花,都像赶集似的聚拢过来,形成了烂漫的春天.小燕子从南方赶来,为春光增添了许多生趣.在微风中,在阳光中,燕子斜着身子在天空中掠过,”唧”的一声,已由这边的稻田上,飞到那边的柳树下了；有的横掠过湖面,尾尖或翼尖偶尔沾了一下水面,那小圆晕便一圈一圈地荡漾开去.几对燕子飞倦了,落在电线上.在蓝天的映衬下,电杆之间连着几痕细线,多么像五线谱啊,停着的燕子成了音符,谱出一支春天的歌.这篇文章的第三小节的意思!
• 黑夜里,我寻找你单薄的身影,在这,寂寞的街、寂寞的夜、皎洁月色下,你就蜷缩在角落里.无助的眼神,颤抖的身子,吨重石头把你压,无法帮你搬开这巨大的石头,骤然,眼睛不禁湿透了轮廓,这一刻...心身沾血!（人总是无法）
• a大于b的绝对值,则a的平方大于b的平方.