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It was a sunny day in June 7th when we had a trip to Shanghai Park.we set out at 6:30a.m.by school bus.The programme was very iteresting.We wentaround the park and took photos in the morning and had a picnic at noon.We were all so tired that we could do notjing but yawn.What nice palaces these are!At last,we had a class meeting when we come back.I think this trip will be a good memory.
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We went for a travel to Shanghai Park on Jun 7th ,it was a sunny day.After gathering at the school gate at 6:30 ,we went them by bus.In the morning ,we traveled around the park ,taking photoes and pla...