请问这句话正确么?

问题描述:

请问这句话正确么?
In the middle stand two
persons,facing a bottle with most of water flowing on the floor.

结构正确,不过,意思不太明确.有些小错误:most of the water
倒装句, facing...是状语
相当于:
Two persons stand in the middle, facing a bottle with most of the water flowing on the floor
两个人站在中间,面对着一个大量的水在地上流的瓶子.