(英文)想请问一下这两句话逻辑连接的上吗?两句之间需要加连接词吗?感觉有点不通顺

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(英文)想请问一下这两句话逻辑连接的上吗?两句之间需要加连接词吗?感觉有点不通顺
When I entered university,I find a second-hand kitchenware and stationery is very popular due to the low price and good quality.By recycling,processing on second- hand goods,then sold them on price difference to get a profit

When I entered university, I found a second-hand kitchenware and stationery which is very popular due to the low prices and good quality. By recycling, processing on second- hand goods, I then sold th...