帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词
帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词
Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.
One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good man,but he isn’t a good master.” Because he forget give ben breakfast every day.
Odie and ben are good friends.Odie visited ben's room.Mr.forgetful didn‘t give ben breakfast again.Ben can't bear that.He wants to give Mr.forgetful a lesson.
Ben leaves home.he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry.Mr.fogetful can’t find ben.He goes to Lost and Found Office.A girl greets him in the office.Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.The girl put photos into the window.
Odie and ben pass the Lost and Found Office.Ben sees photo his own.He know Mr.forgetful is looking for him.He goes home happily.but Mr.forgert calls him odie.Ben has nothing to say.
就是这篇
Because he forget give ben breakfast every day.
改为 ---because he forgets giving ben breakfast every day.
he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry.
改为-----he wants to make Mr.Forgetful know he is angry.
Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.
改为---Mr.forgerful gives her a photo of ben.
The girl put photos into the window
改为--The girl puts the photo on the window
Ben sees photo his own
改为---Ben sees photo of his own
然后就没什么问题了,但是如果你是在讲故事的话,全文都应该用过去时态,但是现在这个样子也不能说你的错的.