这个英语长句怎么修改
问题描述：
这个英语长句怎么修改
In this letter,by offering their new faculty’s spouse a job,imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),the president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that such decision will attract most gifted teachers and researchers to PU and improve the moral of PU’s staff.
上面这个句子我觉得插入语imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),这样的话应该是缺少了主语.但是想保留这样的语序.不知道如何修改.
这个长句想表达的意思是“PU的president想通过给员工的配偶找工作来吸引gifted teacher 而这个想法首先是BC想出来的”
我想首先强调这个decision 然后用一个从句 解释一下这个decision 是首先由BC想出来的.
答
by offering their new faclty's spouse a job -- a new initiative first adopted by BC -- the president of ...