请求英语高手帮我修改一下本人写的两篇四级作文,

请求英语高手帮我修改一下本人写的两篇四级作文,
1：
In China,the Spring Fasitival is not only a primary holiday but also a sense of unforgetable in reunion.
A great number of Chinese are customed with seeing the Spring Fasitival with whole family at New Year’s Eve.For one thing,it seems like a essential part at this special night,people could relax completely by a variety of progammes to get rid of the burden of work.For another thing,people could get together to summerize the pass year and fill up the ivgor to meet the challenges in the future.
However,other people point out the Spring Fasitival shall be cancel.They think presious time shall spend on holiday a meeting to share the happiness and sorrow face to face or laund an outdoor activities instead of wasting on TV.
In my view of this phenomenon,I think it is based on your choice.It just a way which establish a harmonious atmosphere for each menbers to enjoy the great festival and increase the loving between all of us.
2：
An increasing numbers of museums have been accessed free aimed at making more and more people get useful imformation about various kinds of fields.
Even though the decision is convenient for citizens to widen their outlook,the number of vistors who have a desire for having a look is on the rise bings some problems.First,the safety is the vitally important faced with us and everyone should pay more attention to the safety on life or property.Second,all the exhibitions are so precious that people should not touch with fingers instead of keep a distances to look.Third,if the government do not make up the financial problem for a long time,the museums may have the difficult in lving better.
To sum up,in my opinions,though free museums are a sign of civilization progress admission must be conducted in a controlled manner.