英语作文30分,这篇能的多少分?
英语作文30分,这篇能的多少分?
Nowadays,a lot of students have to wear school uniforms.But there are many students don't like the school unifprms.they are very strict with the school uniform's color and style.They want to wear that they like shcool uniforms.I think our school should allow us to design our school uniforms .i think the school uniforms must be blue or green,the clothes must be T-shirt,the pants must be jeans.
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作文有什么要求,例如字数要求.那内容要求的80词首先字数差不多大概至少得12分，句子大致读通，大概14.5，扣除的分数是文采和语法，其中还有一些错误单词，不知是你写错了还是打错了，are very strict with 主语是人而不应该是校服，They want to wear that they like shcool uniforms语法不对，建议改成They want to wear the shcool uniforms that they like ，unifprms应该是uniforms，i think the school uniforms must be blue or green,the clothes must beT-shirt,the pants must be jeans中的must应该改为should，个人情感色彩有所不同，最好不用过于肯定,the clothes must beT-shirt,the pants must be jeans此句不通。。。不过，字迹好一些，有时不认真的老师会给高一些，但是最多超不过21分