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Ah Fu and my sister
Ah Fu is a dog .As for it's a dog . We all proud of it .
One day ,the whole family went to work on the field .Take my sister and Ah Fu alone . The parents were working when my sister playing by the river with Ah Fu .When she was just about to pick a flower .She fell into the river .Ah Fu saw these .It was barking then jumped into the river . My parents heard Ah Fu's bark .Run into the river at once .By this time .Ah Fu was swimming to my sister and taking her to the bank .My parents was so pleased and praised Ah Fu warmly .
Because of this . We all proud of Ah Fu.
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