改一段语法有错误的英语.
改一段语法有错误的英语.
The idea and the action in "Superman Returns" made it the best movie ever.This movie won the 79th Oscar Visual effects award.And income as the United States Independence Day holiday weekend box office champion.The idea of superman stopping the airplane from crashing left an exciting feeling.Superman.The"man of steel" saving the world and facing diffculties.and the earth.our home not being destroys by flood.Superman drumps into deep sea and space...to save mankind.this is a great action that made people survive.
这段语法有问题.
The idea and the action made “Supperman Returns” the best movie ever before.This movie won the 79th Oscar Visual effects award and its income had been the champion of the United States Independence Day holiday weekend box office.The idea that superman stopped the airplane from crashing left an exciting feeling.Superman,the “man of steel”,saved the world and faced difficulties and stopped the world,our home,to be destroyed by flood.Superman jumped into the deep sea and spaced the flood to save mankind.Such great action made people survived.
略作修改,你自己再对比下吧.