英语翻译

英语翻译
汉语意思我想说:我是Becky,我工作的主要职责是负责信息收集.包括负责日常信息的搜集,包括最新动态,行业信息;协助Tom完成客户列表的整理;整理会议信息并在每个月一号发出会议提醒;在每个月中旬发送电子期刊;和其他的市场直销活动的具体实施和跟踪,如mass email,mass fax,mass mailing
以下是我自己翻译的,帮忙给我改改:
Hello,this is Becky,my duty is mainly responsible for the collection of information,such as latest developments,industry news; assisting Tommy finish the customer list collection; clearing up the tradeshow list and forwarding the meeting alert on the 1st of the month; forwarding the enewsletter in mid-month and tracking other direct marketing activities,for example,mass mail,mass fax,mass mailing.