英语作文改错,
英语作文改错,
Dear Joe Fread:
How are you?Thank you to me.I know a lot of you and I tell you something about me.Iam in a big school.There are 2432 studens in my school,54 classes and 149 teachers in it.There are forty--three students in my class.There are very friendly.Our classroom is big and bright.I like chinese very much.I study chinese very well.I study English very well,too.Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m.My school is beautiful I like my school.Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Hunt
"Thank you to me"改成Thank you for sth
"know a lot of you" 改成know a lot about you
"There are very friendly"改成ther are very friendly
"Our class is from half past seven a.m.to five o'clock p.m"改成Our class begins at half past seven a.m and stops at five o'clock p.m比较好
"Please write to me soon"提段好些