英语高手帮我看看我写得怎么样!括号中的是我写的.

英语高手帮我看看我写得怎么样!括号中的是我写的.
Hi,Liu Ying,
How is everything with you?I know you are going to study in Britain soon.（For breakfast,they eat fried egg,bread,cakes,tomatoes,tea,coffee and fruit.In lunch,they eat sandwich and a cup of coffee.In dinner,they eat beef or fish with vegetables.On weekends,they will begin with soup or snacks,followed by chicken,beef,pork with potatoes,vegetable and so on.
You should remember these!）
Yours,
Wei Hua
帮我看看我有没有语法错误.
要求：
假设你的朋友刘英要去英国留学并住在英国人家里。请你给她发一封邮件，告诉她英国人的饮食习惯。电子邮件的内容包括英国人一日三餐吃什么以及周末用餐的特点等。