求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方

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求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方
yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good guy who is really love you and makes you happy.

yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So forget all about me.I hope that you can find a good guy who really loves you and makes you happy.