英语翻译我的名字叫XXX.我本来计划以雅思6分成绩前往贵校参加5周的语言课程,但现在我希望以雅思6.5分的成绩于明年9月入学.

Dr .sir/miss
my name is XXX. I had planned to participate in the 5 week of language curriculum in 6 mark of IELTS achievement to your school , but now I wish to entry your school in IELTS score of 6.5 in the September .
Thank you very much !
XXX

Hello, my name is XXX. I had planned to 6 mark of IELTS achievement to your school to participate in the 5 week of language curriculum, but now I hope to IELTS score of 6.5 in the September entry. Thank you.

My name is xxx.I planed to take part in the five-weeks language course in your university if I scored 6 in the IELTS,but I changed my mind,I want to be admitted by your university in the next Septem...

如果您之前已经向学校提交过申请,并已经完成雅思测试，成绩为6.5：
Hello,
My name is XXX.
I originally applied to attend the five-week language course at your institution with a 6.0 IELTS score. Now I have completed the IELTS Test with a score of 6.5 so I'm wondering if I can enter the program with this grade in the following September.
Thank you very much for your time!
XXX