求帮忙纠正一下这段话中的语法错误
求帮忙纠正一下这段话中的语法错误
After I finished reading the last part of this novel,I felt a part of my heart has already empty,just like something important had gone.
If I was a Literature Girl(a girl who like eating books),I would eat them without any think at once,and their taste,might be some "funny"、 some "lonely"、some "adamant" and some "warm".
But I am not a Literature Girl.I can only stay there,and "taste" the story and those characters by my eyes and heart.
直接把改后的发上来就好~谢谢了【鞠躬
After I had finished reading last part of this novel,I felt drained just like everything had gone out of me.
If I were Literature Girl,the girl who liked eating books,I would eat books without any second thoughts and I would rate the taste of the books as funny,lonely,adamant and warm.
But I am not the Literature Girl,I could taste the story through my eyes (how I saw the story) and heart (how I felt the story).谢谢~~可不可以帮忙也改一下这两句呢Q QIf you wear some masks for a long time, it will not be taken off again.The thing which is more awful than the ghost, is human's thinking.请把两句先用中文写，因为我不知道你的意思。If you wear some masks for a long time, it will not be taken off again.The thing which is more awful than the ghost, is human's thinking.比鬼神更可怕的，是人心。有些面具戴得太久，就摘不下来了。If there is anything more scary than ghosts, it's the human heart/motive.比鬼神更可怕的，是人心。There are some masks if worn too long can no longer be taken off. 有些面具戴得太久，就摘不下来了。