英语翻译

问题描述:

英语翻译
“南希虽然很想参加辩论,但腼腆得不敢开口.”
这句话怎么翻译比较好
Although she like joining in the argument Nancy was too shy to open her mouth
这样翻对么?

Although desirous to take part in the debate, Nancy was too shy to open her mouth. 更好一些