求一句话的语法解析

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求一句话的语法解析
The more you share,the deeper the friendship will be.老师说这句话应把will be改成you will enjoy更恰当
2.Not merely do real friends share the happiness,but also frustration.他说frustration前面要加上they share.
谁能解释一下这样改对吗 为什么 谢谢!

1.The more you share,the deeper the friendship will be.我认为这样说也是可以的 或者做一下改动The more (happiness)you share,the deeperfriendship you will enjoy.(the friendship 不能有the)你们分...