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Dear Tom,Hi!Tom.How is the weather in the UK?The temperature in here is dropping,It's colder and colder.Now I am in Grade 8.As for English,we always learn textbook English,so my oral English is poor.And..could you help me with my intonation?Moreover,I'm not clearly know that the differences between English English and American English.Well...Do you wanna come to China?I'm in Yingtan,Jiangxi.If you come to Jiangxi,I can be the guide of you.Yingtan has a scenic spot,the Mt.Longhushan(dragon tiger).It's one of Taoism places of orign.And Jiangxi is a good place for tourism.The most famous is Lushan Mountain Scenic Area.Keep in touch.Yours,Karen
Dear Tom,Hi!Tom.How is the weather like in the UK?The temperature in去掉 here is dropping.It becomes colder and colder.Now I am in Grade 8.As for English,we always learn textbook English so my oral English is poor.And改成so.Could you help me with my intonation?Moreover,I don’t t clearly know that the differences between English and American English.Well...Do you want to（wanna用于口语） come to China?I'm in Yingtan,Jiangxi.If you come to Jiangxi,I can be the guide of you.Yingtan has a scenic spot,the Mt.Longhushan(dragon tiger).It's one of Taoism places of origin.And Jiangxi is a good place for tourism.The most famous is Lushan Mountain Scenic Area.Keeping in touch.Yours,Karen