这句话有语法问题么?能不能改得更简洁?
问题描述：
这句话有语法问题么?能不能改得更简洁?
After careful reflection and mediation,I more contend that this thought-provoking image symbolically conveys one profound layer of implication concerning responsibility
或者改得更高级的表达也行！
答
After careful reflection and mediation, I AM more contend that this thought-provoking image symbolically conveys one profound layer of implication.concerning responsibility去哪了？？？这个可以省略因为前面已经有After careful reflection and mediation了，而且后面还有I AM more contend