高一英语短文改错,文*有十处错误,

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高一英语短文改错,文*有十处错误,
A dog is showing its thanks to its new master by collecting empty bottle for him in Dalian,Liaoning Prov-ince.Wang Lin ,whom makes a living by collecting and selling bottles,saw the small dog crying outside his house in one morning in April.After Wang Lin given the dog some food and water,it refused to leaving.To his surprised,on matter where Wang Lin went,the dog always followed but helped him.The dog is also good guard.If anyone takes a bottle from her truck,the dog runs after him or her and barks until the bottle was returned.

A dog is showing its thanks to its new master by collecting empty bottle--bottles for him in Dalian,Liaoning Prov-ince.Wang Lin ,whom---who makes a living by collecting and selling bottles,saw the small dog crying outside his house in 去掉in one morning in April.After Wang Lin given---gave或者 had given the dog some food and water,it refused to leaving--refuse .To his surprised--surprise ,on --no matter where Wang Lin went,the dog always followed but--and helped him.The dog is also-- a 加上 good guard.If anyone takes a bottle from her --his truck,the dog runs after him or her and barks until the bottle was -- is returned.
其中 no matter where那是你打印有问题吧.那不该是一个错误吧.那个的确是我打错了。。。“it refused to leaving--refuse .”这句你确定修改对了吗?refusedto leave看错了。surprised应该是对的呀to one's surprise后面要用名词的。这是没问题的,我保证准确。