能帮我改改这篇英语文章吗
能帮我改改这篇英语文章吗
Obstacles in my English learning?As time goes on,they are become more and more serious.Form listening to writing,they are different for me.The grammars,which are boring and tedious,become the biggest obstacle I have encountered on my way of English learning.But,in other words,where there is a will there is a way.Although I’m feeling depressed and frustrated,I’ll do whatever I can to overcome it.I have taken many measures to tackle the problem.In the end,I found a proper way to solve the problem.That is——reading.Reading an article not only tell me the thought author want to empress,but also help me many vocabulary and beautiful sentence,including grammar.In the “True Height”,the motto——if you want something,work for it——make a deep impression on me.Not until I read to the last sentence,did I feel astonished and shamed.A blind can overcome such an obstacle; can’t we overcome “the piece of cake”?
第一句就不通哦,怎么有个问号呢.
As time goes on,they are becoming more and more serious.Whether listening or writing,they are all difficult for me.(different 是不同的意思,你想表达的应该是困难吧) The grammar which is boring and tedious has become the biggest obstacle on my way of learning English.However,there is a famous saying goes:Where there is a will there is a way.Although I’m feeling depressed and frustrated,I’ll spare no effort to fight against it.I have taken many measures to tackle the problem and I explored a proper way to solve it.That is reading.Reading an article not only tells me the thoughts that author wanted to empress but also helps me have a command of many vocabularies and beautiful sentences.Moreover,reading consolidates my grammar knowledge.（In the “True Height”是什么意思啊,我没有见过哦) There is a motto leaving a deep impression on me.It said that if you want something,work for it.Not until I read t the last sentence,did I feel astonished and shamed.Even a blind man can overcome such an obstacle.As normal persons,can't we overcome “the piece of cake”?谢谢哈，，嘿嘿，，是根据课文写的，， “True Height“是课文名，，已经写了一遍，，老师让我们再改改，，实在改不出来了，，嘿嘿，，