his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.

问题描述:

his success came from his insistent,he teaches me the success is that insist on the dream.
这句话有什么语法错误吗?

有.一、insistent是形容词,不能放在物主代词后面;二、me后面是宾语从句,宾语从句中的success是抽象名词,不要加the;三、is后面如果用了that,则后面是一个表语从句,但这个表语从句没有主语.改动法:一、insistent改...