求高手改一下我刚写的一篇英语六级作文,
求高手改一下我刚写的一篇英语六级作文,
1有人认为名字很重要
2也有人认为无关紧要,
3我认为
The Inprotance Of a name
In recent years,the topic of the inportance of a name has aroused pervasive attention.As we all know,some people even turn to perfassional consult for a good name.While with the passage of time,defferent voices rise over whether should name divide into good or bad?
Some people hold the opinion that a good name deserves everything.For them,a good name not only influence their emotion,but also may lead to some unexpected rewards.Such as weathey,social status and promotion prospects.
On the contrary,other people take the opposing view that a good name is nothing.For one thing,names have long been set as a symbol of a person.What’s more,it can help us communicatae with each other conveniently..For another,only with a good name can our not enlarge our konwledge and develop our character.
In my point of view,there shouldn’t be a distinction between good names or bad names.
I don’t think some names will replace others completely or some names will despair in the near future.
The Importance Of a Name
In recent years,the topic of the importance of a name has aroused pervasive attention.As we all know,some people even turn to professional consult for a good name.While with the pass of time,defferent voices rise over whether should a name be divided into good and bad?
Some people hold the opinion that a good name deserves everything.For them,a good name not only influences their emotion,but also may lead to some unexpected rewards.Such as weather,social status and promotion prospects.
On the contrary,other people take the oppose view that a good name is nothing.For one thing,the name has long been set as a symbol of a person.What’s more,it can help us to communicatae with each other conveniently..For another,only with a good name can not enlarge our konwledge and develop our character.
In my point of view,there shouldn’t be a distinction between good names and bad names.
I don’t think good names will replace bad names completely or bad names will despair in the near future.