改错,只有十处错误：Half a year ago I went abroad for further study.
改错,只有十处错误：Half a year ago I went abroad for further study.
I received a lot of presents.All wrapped in color paper.Among them were two presents which were really interested me.My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in it.My brother gave me a note,which read,"My present has been put in your bedroom." When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box in it.Opening the box,I got a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would help me use body language to communicate wih people and improve my English . 怎么改?为什么?
I received a lot of presents.All wrapped in color paper.Among they were two presents which i really interested in it.My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and words about customs of different countries ..My brother gave me a note,which read,"My present has been put in your bedroom." When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box opening in it.I got a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would help me use body language to communicate with people and improve my English i自己慢慢找吧.我有改过,但有些不确定.额、那为什么要这么改呢？them 是指“他们的”、” which i really interested in it“是我这个学期学的，so不是很确定、” I found a box opening in it“感觉、我在里面找到一个打开的盒子、custom 是风俗所以不用复数 All werewrapped in color paper 因为是过去式