改错,只有十处错误：Half a year ago I went abroad for further study.I received a lot of presents.All wrapped in color paper.Among them were two presents which were really interested me.My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in it.My brother gave me a note,which read,"My present has been put in your bedroom." When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box in it.Opening the box,I got a
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改错,只有十处错误：Half a year ago I went abroad for further study.
I received a lot of presents.All wrapped in color paper.Among them were two presents which were really interested me.My sister bought me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in it.My brother gave me a note,which read,"My present has been put in your bedroom." When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box in it.Opening the box,I got a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would help me use body language to communicate wih people and improve my English . 怎么改?为什么?
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